New AF Story goes live!

ariaisland · Post by **ariaisland** » 19 Jun 2005 18:29

OPERATION REBORN - EPISODE 1 is now released!!.

Please let me know what you think!

I would specifically like to know if you consider the story is to long? or too short? for future episodes. Especially as I now have the next 4 episodes written.

Your opinions will be greatly received!

ariaisland · Post by **ariaisland** » 02 Jul 2005 17:00

Any want to write a review or pass comment? Please do!

Sparky · Post by **Sparky** » 05 Jul 2005 19:28

I tried looking at it but it says "bat encryption dictionary" and doesn't work.

ariaisland · Post by **ariaisland** » 05 Jul 2005 20:12

Anyone else having problems with the V7 file? Please let me know...

ariaisland · Post by **ariaisland** » 05 Jul 2005 20:29

I have now updated the instructions on the web site. It seems that people may be attempting to open the file in their web browser. Not all browsers are capable of this....apparently (my fault).

Save the file to your computer and then open it once your browser is closed.

Brakkart · Post by **Brakkart** » 13 Jul 2005 21:42

Read it and it seems to be going well. I'm guessing the shadows will turn up in due course. Keep at it, I'll certainly check back to see when part 2 is ready to read.

ariaisland · Post by **ariaisland** » 14 Jul 2005 20:27

I am sure they will.....however, Episodes 2, 3, 4, and 5 are done. However I would like to hear more feedback from readers before I release the main story. This will help me shape things.

Episode 1 was designed as a teaser for the main story.

ariaisland · Post by **ariaisland** » 22 Jan 2006 14:36

Just to let you all know I have now updated my website. My figures are now for sale! as well as for swaps.

alexbusbyuk · Post by **alexbusbyuk** » 25 May 2006 14:22

Any ideas when the next parts are gonna be posted,

looking forwards to them.

ariaisland · Post by **ariaisland** » 05 Jun 2006 21:54

Just a quick update. Operation Reborn is complete, but it is undergoing serious scrutiny at the moment. I asked for it after all! but seriously. I want the story to be worthwhile reading, so please be patient (as you all have been) as I finish it off to the best of my ability.

For those of you who had difficulty reading Episode 1, I have amended my site with a new version. If you would like to see any other formats please let me know.

I will also be revisiting Episode 1 to make enhancements once Episode 2 is released. Your comments will be appreciated.

I will keep you all posted.