Part 4
Chalk Two
The Blackhawk was plummeting faster many of its occupants had blacked out the pilot was trying to make a distress call when suddenly the chopper crashed through a building scattering debris everywhere. On the ground Opey’s broken body was lying on a rusted car he was suddenly surrounded by gun toting Red Shadows and a unit leader. Their leader was a heavy set Russian wearing a silver mask he looked down at Opey contemptuously and took his rifle butt smashing in the side of Opey’s head.
From his vantage point Agent Seizure saw everything unfold and whispered “Destro?†when he saw the big Russian he took his radio saying “Base Command do you copy over?†His contact replying “Yes we do overâ€, the Agent relayed everything but his base replied “That isn’t Destro we will send you a file on all known Red Shadow Operatives, do you copy over? Hail Cobra!â€
At the crash site there were screams from the building many locals had come out now to see what was happening many cursing the foreigners. Inside Eddie had come to he checked on Miller, Bill and the others some were bloodied and dazed. The Pilot tried making mayday calls again to base; his co-pilot took out the issued pistol and the black box. Eddie and the others stumbled out trying to carry the worse casualties. Eddie had felt a slight loss he looked down and saw his finger was missing up to the knuckle so he tried to staunch the bleeding with a piece of gauze from the first aid in shock he hadn’t noticed it missing.
Red Jackal, the heavyset Russian was scrambling all units to be fully reinforced and on the lookout for more armed men like his prisoner then he called the Baron.
The Baron at the Villa had the Laser Exterminator installed on the roof and a unit of the new laser riflemen stationed outside his door. Ironblood got on the Public Announcement system demanding all citizens to rise up and hunt down the aggressors. In his cell Rivera and Michelle were cowering in each other’s arms wondering what will happen next.
Chalk Three
Chalk Three had to traverse the road to the west of San Rivera which had now been laced with land mines not knowing the chaos they were about to arrive in. Ed was in the lead Humvee gun seat he was acting as spotter for the column he saw the smoke coming from the confines of the walled city and signalled for the column to stop.
The column agreed to radio Chalks One and Two for sit-reps before they drove through the city.
An undisclosed location, United Kingdom
“Andy!†The tall grey bearded man called out. Andy was of a medium build with dark hair gelled back and had stubble, he approached the front desk. Andy said “What can I do Sir?†The Bearded Man said “Please escort Mr. Tree to Room 1672, Mr. Tree if you will please follow Andy he will show you aroundâ€. Andy nodded and took Dave away. Buckingham smiled then said “Nicely handled Boffin now can you show me the secret project I asked you aboutâ€. The two men went into a storeroom behind the desk and then through a concealed entrance. Inside the room were several vehicles with tarpaulin over them. Boffin said “I have a new apprentice a rather disgruntled type of chap together we have been working on the projectâ€, they walked past a Mobile Missile system painted in white and a Flak Cannon both decked with SWS on them before approaching their destination. On their way they walked past a white garbed man with an orange and white helmet on Boffin stopped him “Fixer dear boy have you seen my new apprentice?†Fixer stopped, saluted both men and said “He is in the EMP chamber Boffin Sirâ€.
Chalk One
Marshall was talking to Chalk Three on the radio so far everything was ok he had put Ross and Mat on overwatch. Suddenly, Mat came rushing up to him “Sir, Sir there is smoke in the southern sector and reports of one of our birds going downâ€. Marshall took it all in then calmly said “Take Steve and Ross over there and see what you can do also get Inman on the hook and find out how bad it is now go!†Mat nodded and rushed off to get Steve and Ross.
The Baron’s Villa
At the Villa the Baron had received news about the downed chopper he gave orders to dispatch Mutons to that sector and retrieve any plans from the wreckage of the Black Hawk.
Chalk Two
The Red Jackal had Opey’s body sent to a medical centre under close guard he would keep the fool alive to wring out information from him. He also had barricades erected in all streets in his sector and Red Shadows and locals to man them. The Baron contacted Jackal telling him a detachment of Mutons was on its way to his area the Jackal smiled and curtly replied “Da Baron I understand!â€
Inman assessed the wreckage of the building they were in he saw bodies of people under the Hawk lying mangled and bloody He also saw fuel starting to spill out from a ruptured fuel line.
Inman ordered his men to evacuate and locate any other people trapped in the building. Miller got a few inches out a doorway downstairs and was greeted by a hail of bullets that went through both shoulder blades and his kneecaps he fell dropping his rifle screaming in agony. Kandowski saw Miller drop and dragged his body back in he let off a few bursts killing two vengeful locals. Lovern checked through the building and found no other bodies dead or alive he also didn’t see the bullet that ripped a testicle off sending him on his knees in pain. Walt threw a grenade out disintegrating part of an erected barricade and blowing the arm off a Red Shadow. He saw Lovern clutching his groin and crawled over to staunch the blood cascading out he shouted “Medic!â€
Chalk Three
Chalk Three received reports from Inman and decided to mine their way through the wall. They then drove their humvees into hell itself. The locals and Red Shadows had thrown up barricades that made it almost impossible to drive the humvees through. Ed was firing away frantically at anyone and anything he saw. Round the corner was a Shadow Trak as soon as the lead humvee got near the Trak fired both missiles that ripped through the armour plating and Ed’s legs his body sloughed down in the gun port showering the vehicles occupants.
Chalk Two
Mat and his group had a long, hard slog to Inman’s location several times they had been pinned down they got there as the Mutons arrived. The death robots were firing their head mounted cannons into the building pinning the survivors of Chalk Three down. D-Day laughed “Look at them gimpy things†as he said that one turned towards him. D-Day wasn’t laughing now he shouldered his grenade launcher and fired a grenade at the oncoming Muton’s head. The lucky shot took the Muton’s head right off but it kept coming for him suddenly Ross charged it yelling “Fuck you Terminator!!†He had picked up some wreckage and speared the Muton through the stomach area. D-Day said holding the Muton’s wrecked head “Mat when we get a chance take a pic of me with this will you? Mat just shook his head and smiled.
End of Part 4
Showdown at San Rivera Part 4
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Showdown at San Rivera Part 4
Spock, where the hell's the power you promised?
One damn minute, Admiral

"Red! The colour of my Shadows, The colour of fire and of blood......All that I stand for!" Baron Ironblood, Operation Bloodhound
One damn minute, Admiral

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Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 4
Any comments on the story so far? Any feedback at all would be great on this.
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One damn minute, Admiral

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One damn minute, Admiral

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Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 4
I specially liked the part of Andy escorting Dave to "Room 1672"

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Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 4
I will be adding a few more things like this DA if you are wondering what is going on with your character there will be more on him soon.
Spock, where the hell's the power you promised?
One damn minute, Admiral

"Red! The colour of my Shadows, The colour of fire and of blood......All that I stand for!" Baron Ironblood, Operation Bloodhound
One damn minute, Admiral

"Red! The colour of my Shadows, The colour of fire and of blood......All that I stand for!" Baron Ironblood, Operation Bloodhound
Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 4
lol! enjoying these mate, love my terminator line!
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Re: Showdown at San Rivera Part 4
Nice one Ross I will probably do a follow-on story to this next year which is why I have developed a small sub plot involving Cobra.
Spock, where the hell's the power you promised?
One damn minute, Admiral

"Red! The colour of my Shadows, The colour of fire and of blood......All that I stand for!" Baron Ironblood, Operation Bloodhound
One damn minute, Admiral

"Red! The colour of my Shadows, The colour of fire and of blood......All that I stand for!" Baron Ironblood, Operation Bloodhound