Action Force: Nightmares

[Malcolm Orr]

This has taken me a while, hence my posting here has been less. An experiment in making a comic with no drawing traditionally.

[Double-Tap]

this is so cool.
theres a spelling error near the end "you who would mimic me and harm by sword brother"
really original looking and nightmarish.
you planning any more?
Bill

[Malcolm Orr]

Correcting it now...

It's hard to proofread your own stuff.

I might do more as the Sideshow stuff rolls out. I might do 'Snake Hunt' using the figures. A Storm Shadow one is a must too.

[Malcolm Orr]

That Storm Shadow on page 7 is the sideshow one from their promo material, so I expect the actual figure will photogrpah and be watercoloured well.

[The Baron]

Excellent stuff, Malcolm. Very dark, reminiscent of Ashley Wood's Spawn books. Can't quite make out what Snakes is holding to his eye, though. Is it a telescopic sight?

Sorry to say there's another typo on the first page. An extra a in meditations.

[Ross SC]

Excellent stuff, Malcolm. Very dark, reminiscent of Ashley Wood's Spawn books. Can't quite make out what Snakes is holding to his eye, though. Is it a telescopic sight?

Sorry to say there's another typo on the first page. An extra a in meditations.

he's holding his uzi!!!!!!
this is cool, good job! i really wanna do a dio story, but it's such a big job! maybe i should try something like this!

[The Baron]

Is he? It looks like his hand is to the side, not underneath.

If I was to be really pedantic, I'd make it "I bring death unto you."

[Red Laser]

Excellent story Malcolm and graphics

[Malcolm Orr]

Cheers for the comments guys. I'll be working on the final version for the site.

Born In Blood has been reworked too (slightly) so I'll send that to Jim too.