Help needed for Mailaway Z Force Commander Please!

[paul463]

Primary Military Speciality: Strategic studies

Secondary Military Speciality: Anti- terrorist tactics

Previously served as a Sqn Commader with SAS Force and was the brains behind Op Bloodhound. Passed with honours at the at the UK Forces staff college defore being appointed as director of operations for the European Theatre. After several sucesses against Baron Ironblood he was fast tracked to become the commander-in-chief of Action Force. He is a no nonsense leader who expects nothing but perfection from his junior commanders.

[SteveD]

There was a datafile in BAF for an AF infantryman. The blurb for Grunt would be ideal.

The backbone of Action Force. Experienced infantrymen from all over the world. Highly trained soldiers ideal for large scale military operations demanded by Action Force. All members graduate Advanced Infantry Training.

Damn - beaten to it.

[Stanley Fernando]

Go with Jonesys blurb on The Commander cardback....very precise and Palitoyesq.

[paulitoy]

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Great stuff! Thank you fellas, I've got plenty to work with there for Red Hat and Grunt.

[paulitoy]

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SteveD, Jonesy and Paul463,

I had a think about all your ideas and made a mish-mash up of them.

I guess he should be Z Force-orientated rather than the overall 'boss' although I can completely understand the boss idea.

It's Z Force so that I can put a nice on the front side of the card.

Anyway, here's the blurb:

Feedback please. Especially any cock-ups, spelling errors, etc.

[paul463]

Paul that reads really well. The only wee change I would make would be the Sqn commander part and change it to Company Commander. Its an Army thing Infantry in company's, SAS in Squadrons. Bloody pongo's!

[paulitoy]

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Excellent! Cheers Paul - I would never have known that.

The change is made.

Cheers!

[paulitoy]

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I was going to go with 'Boss' funnily enough Jonesy originally.

'Charmer' relates to SteveD's Terry Thomas fixation...