AF fan-fic

Share your stories here! All submissions are welcome!
User avatar
Sundance
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Posts: 5037
Joined: 20 Jan 2009 11:14

AF fan-fic

Post by Sundance »

okay, like i said in my movie thread, I've decided I'm going to write it as a fan-fic. so; does anyone agree that beyond :major: :vulture: :laser: :wolf: and :jackal: and me making :kraken: into a person, the Shads should have some more individualised characters? I'm currently planning on adding a hacker character called 'Landline' and a sniper called 'Kill Shot'. I'm also kicking around a pair of anti-armour types provisionally called 'Bombshell' and 'Shrapnel'.

I'm also making :wolf: into the Hyena commander and :vulture: into the Roboskull wing commander.

I've decided to replace my intial concept of the Triad as a three-engine stealth jet with a more conventional stealth jet called an F/A-24. if anyone wants to suggest a name for it, feel free...

I'm also open to anyone interested in doing artwork to accompany the story of any of the newer vehicles, or characters...

User avatar
Sundance
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Posts: 5037
Joined: 20 Jan 2009 11:14

Re: AF fan-fic

Post by Sundance »

I've decided I'm adding Bombshell and Shrapnel. I've also come up with a female mistress of disguise and seduction called 'Red Fox' to appear in 2.

now I just need a name for the guy Red Vulture replaces and an NBC expert...

any ideas?

User avatar
The Baron
World Enemy No. 1
World Enemy No. 1
Posts: 14718
Joined: 18 Sep 2012 05:10
Location: Secret HQ
Contact:

Re: AF fan-fic

Post by The Baron »

Several of the RS codenames were based on scavengers, so...

Red Coyote, Red Buzzard, Red Dingo, Red Crow, Red Shark, Red Condor, Red Crab, Red Maggot, Red Raven, Red Beetle, Red Hawk, Red Eagle, Red Lion, Red Rat, Red Raccoon, Red Dog, Red Bobcat, Red Bear, Red Worm, Red Fly...

User avatar
Sundance
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Posts: 5037
Joined: 20 Jan 2009 11:14

Re: AF fan-fic

Post by Sundance »

I'm going with Airburst for the NBC guy. Red Condor for the other pilot. i wanted to use Red Raven, but Raven is RV's codename before he defects...

User avatar
Sundance
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Posts: 5037
Joined: 20 Jan 2009 11:14

Re: AF fan-fic

Post by Sundance »

I've started writing this!

First scene is :major:'s defection.

then we meet :baron: as he and a squad of :shadow:s 'rob' a bank in Germany, with a brief cameo from :jackal: .

I was distracted from writing the next bit by research into American jails. but it deals with :baron: and :wolf: :shadow: and :jackal: breaking a Serb sniper out of a secret American jail. next target will be a Russian nuclear weapons disposal site...

User avatar
Chopper
This is what you get when you mess with the SAS
This is what you get when you mess with the SAS
Posts: 7221
Joined: 09 Apr 2003 08:30
Location: Melbourne

Re: AF fan-fic

Post by Chopper »

I always thought Red Dingo was a cool name ;) I am sorta working on a custom Shadowtrak driver called Red Dingo atm. Got to start somewhere.

Sounds cool Sundance.

:chopper:

User avatar
Sundance
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Posts: 5037
Joined: 20 Jan 2009 11:14

Re: AF fan-fic

Post by Sundance »

Chopper will appear! he's going to be Z-Force (SAS will be strictly sneaky buggers, nothing bigger than a DPV buggy or a bike), but he'll be playing a part in the climax with Blades and new pilot-characters called Whirl and Downdraft.

i'm already planning a sequel, which will star Q-Force in part, as well as Space Force.

i've got a vague idea for a third, which i want to get :muton:s in, but i've not worked out much as I'm concetrating on part 1...

User avatar
Chopper
This is what you get when you mess with the SAS
This is what you get when you mess with the SAS
Posts: 7221
Joined: 09 Apr 2003 08:30
Location: Melbourne

Re: AF fan-fic

Post by Chopper »

Sundance wrote:Chopper will appear! he's going to be Z-Force
Nooooooooooooooooooooo. C'mon man, I always pictured him flying Hawk's with Blades on his off days. When the coloured comic archive gets put up, check out "Death of the Hawk" I made it pretty clear that all the Hawk pilots were SAS ;)

Viva La SAS.

Mark

User avatar
The Baron
World Enemy No. 1
World Enemy No. 1
Posts: 14718
Joined: 18 Sep 2012 05:10
Location: Secret HQ
Contact:

Re: AF fan-fic

Post by The Baron »

Is true. :sas: are Special Air Service, :zforce: are Infantry.

User avatar
Sundance
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Friendly Dragonfly Inbound
Posts: 5037
Joined: 20 Jan 2009 11:14

Re: AF fan-fic

Post by Sundance »

Z-Force are artillery, armour and airmobility in my version.

SAS are sneaky bastard commandos.

Post Reply

Return to “Fanfic”