Blood for the Baron!

The Black Major chapter one is now online.









Colours by John O' Hagan.

nice work. just a shame there's a bit cut off the bottom in the one panel.

Wow! If not for knowing him from other stories, I wouldn't have guessed was the villain! I mean, it seems like those stories about the worth of training hard and doing the best you can.
Nice colouring, save for the hideous red spots on 's chest in the latest panels.

DAMartin wrote:Wow! If not for knowing him from other stories, I wouldn't have guessed was the villain! I mean, it seems like those stories about the worth of training hard and doing the best you can.
Nice colouring, save for the hideous red spots on 's chest in the latest panels.

you dont like his nipples?

really nice colouring and loving this a lot as its one of my favourite BAF stories...

lol, more nipple action.

i really like the colouring on this

The Kraken Wakes wrote:you dont like his nipples?

Well, no, I find nipples hideous, like a big mole on the chest.

Ok anyway meanwhile back on the ranch...... Fuzz does great work I like what he has done with this story so far and can't wait to see more. He has a deviantart page so I am sure he would like feedback on it. I can't post a link to it because the pcs here in work have a lot of sites blocked.

The link is in the colourist credit at the bottom of the post. DA, do you not like nipples in general, or do you not like the colourist's style? Please bear in mind that the thread is primarily for artistic feedback.

I dislike nipples in general, and mentioned these in particular due to being added by the color, but the rest of the colouring is very good overall. I just highlighted the nipples due to being in the latest panels, thus being my last impression of the story (first and last impressions are very important). That also means that I'll just see them as a minor thing once the complete coloured version is finished.

what's wrong with nipples?