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Action Force: Nightmares
Posted: 06 May 2009 22:47
by Malcolm Orr
Re: Action Force: Nightmares
Posted: 06 May 2009 22:53
by Double-Tap
this is so cool.
theres a spelling error near the end "you who would mimic me and harm by sword brother"
really original looking and nightmarish.
you planning any more?
Bill
Re: Action Force: Nightmares
Posted: 06 May 2009 22:58
by Malcolm Orr
Correcting it now...
It's hard to proofread your own stuff.
I might do more as the Sideshow stuff rolls out. I might do 'Snake Hunt' using the figures. A Storm Shadow one is a must too.
Re: Action Force: Nightmares
Posted: 06 May 2009 23:01
by Malcolm Orr
That Storm Shadow on page 7 is the sideshow one from their promo material, so I expect the actual figure will photogrpah and be watercoloured well.
Re: Action Force: Nightmares
Posted: 06 May 2009 23:37
by The Baron
Excellent stuff, Malcolm. Very dark, reminiscent of Ashley Wood's Spawn books. Can't quite make out what Snakes is holding to his eye, though. Is it a telescopic sight?
Sorry to say there's another typo on the first page. An extra a in meditations.
Re: Action Force: Nightmares
Posted: 06 May 2009 23:48
by Ross SC
The Baron wrote:Excellent stuff, Malcolm. Very dark, reminiscent of Ashley Wood's Spawn books. Can't quite make out what Snakes is holding to his eye, though. Is it a telescopic sight?
Sorry to say there's another typo on the first page. An extra a in meditations.
he's holding his uzi!!!!!!
this is cool, good job! i really wanna do a dio story, but it's such a big job! maybe i should try something like this!
Re: Action Force: Nightmares
Posted: 07 May 2009 00:06
by The Baron
Is he? It looks like his hand is to the side, not underneath.
If I was to be really pedantic, I'd make it "I bring death unto you."
Re: Action Force: Nightmares
Posted: 07 May 2009 00:08
by Red Laser
Excellent story Malcolm and graphics

Re: Action Force: Nightmares
Posted: 08 May 2009 21:54
by Malcolm Orr
Cheers for the comments guys. I'll be working on the final version for the site.
Born In Blood has been reworked too (slightly) so I'll send that to Jim too.