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AF fan-fic
Posted: 02 Feb 2009 13:59
by Sundance
okay, like i said in my movie thread, I've decided I'm going to write it as a fan-fic. so; does anyone agree that beyond

and

and me making

into a person, the Shads should have some more individualised characters? I'm currently planning on adding a hacker character called 'Landline' and a sniper called 'Kill Shot'. I'm also kicking around a pair of anti-armour types provisionally called 'Bombshell' and 'Shrapnel'.
I'm also making

into the Hyena commander and

into the Roboskull wing commander.
I've decided to replace my intial concept of the Triad as a three-engine stealth jet with a more conventional stealth jet called an F/A-24. if anyone wants to suggest a name for it, feel free...
I'm also open to anyone interested in doing artwork to accompany the story of any of the newer vehicles, or characters...
Re: AF fan-fic
Posted: 03 Feb 2009 12:47
by Sundance
I've decided I'm adding Bombshell and Shrapnel. I've also come up with a female mistress of disguise and seduction called 'Red Fox' to appear in 2.
now I just need a name for the guy Red Vulture replaces and an NBC expert...
any ideas?
Re: AF fan-fic
Posted: 03 Feb 2009 16:50
by The Baron
Several of the RS codenames were based on scavengers, so...
Red Coyote, Red Buzzard, Red Dingo, Red Crow, Red Shark, Red Condor, Red Crab, Red Maggot, Red Raven, Red Beetle, Red Hawk, Red Eagle, Red Lion, Red Rat, Red Raccoon, Red Dog, Red Bobcat, Red Bear, Red Worm, Red Fly...
Re: AF fan-fic
Posted: 03 Feb 2009 23:05
by Sundance
I'm going with Airburst for the NBC guy. Red Condor for the other pilot. i wanted to use Red Raven, but Raven is RV's codename before he defects...
Re: AF fan-fic
Posted: 05 Feb 2009 12:53
by Sundance
I've started writing this!
First scene is

's defection.
then we meet

as he and a squad of :shadow:s 'rob' a bank in Germany, with a brief cameo from

.
I was distracted from writing the next bit by research into American jails. but it deals with

and

and

breaking a Serb sniper out of a secret American jail. next target will be a Russian nuclear weapons disposal site...
Re: AF fan-fic
Posted: 05 Feb 2009 13:08
by Chopper
I always thought Red Dingo was a cool name

I am sorta working on a custom Shadowtrak driver called Red Dingo atm. Got to start somewhere.
Sounds cool Sundance.

Re: AF fan-fic
Posted: 05 Feb 2009 18:57
by Sundance
Chopper will appear! he's going to be Z-Force (SAS will be strictly sneaky buggers, nothing bigger than a DPV buggy or a bike), but he'll be playing a part in the climax with Blades and new pilot-characters called Whirl and Downdraft.
i'm already planning a sequel, which will star Q-Force in part, as well as Space Force.
i've got a vague idea for a third, which i want to get :muton:s in, but i've not worked out much as I'm concetrating on part 1...
Re: AF fan-fic
Posted: 06 Feb 2009 00:31
by Chopper
Sundance wrote:Chopper will appear! he's going to be Z-Force
Nooooooooooooooooooooo. C'mon man, I always pictured him flying Hawk's with Blades on his off days. When the coloured comic archive gets put up, check out "Death of the Hawk" I made it pretty clear that all the Hawk pilots were SAS
Viva La SAS.
Mark
Re: AF fan-fic
Posted: 06 Feb 2009 00:55
by The Baron
Is true.

are Special Air Service,

are Infantry.
Re: AF fan-fic
Posted: 06 Feb 2009 08:48
by Sundance
Z-Force are artillery, armour and airmobility in my version.
SAS are sneaky bastard commandos.