BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major

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BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major

Postby The Baron » 21 Feb 2010 10:59

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The Black Major chapter one is now online.

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Colours by John O' Hagan.
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Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major

Postby Sundance » 21 Feb 2010 12:31

nice work. just a shame there's a bit cut off the bottom in the one panel.
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Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major

Postby DAMartin » 21 Feb 2010 17:27

Wow! If not for knowing him from other stories, I wouldn't have guessed :major: was the villain! I mean, it seems like those stories about the worth of training hard and doing the best you can.
Nice colouring, save for the hideous red spots on :major: 's chest in the latest panels.
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Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major

Postby The Kraken Wakes » 21 Feb 2010 17:38

DAMartin wrote:Wow! If not for knowing him from other stories, I wouldn't have guessed :major: was the villain! I mean, it seems like those stories about the worth of training hard and doing the best you can.
Nice colouring, save for the hideous red spots on :major: 's chest in the latest panels.
you dont like his nipples?

really nice colouring and loving this a lot as its one of my favourite BAF stories...
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Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major

Postby Double-Tap » 21 Feb 2010 17:42

lol, more nipple action.

i really like the colouring on this
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Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major

Postby DAMartin » 21 Feb 2010 18:00

The Kraken Wakes wrote:you dont like his nipples?
Well, no, I find nipples hideous, like a big mole on the chest.
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Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major

Postby Red Laser » 22 Feb 2010 14:36

Ok anyway meanwhile back on the ranch...... Fuzz does great work I like what he has done with this story so far and can't wait to see more. He has a deviantart page so I am sure he would like feedback on it. I can't post a link to it because the pcs here in work have a lot of sites blocked.
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Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major

Postby The Baron » 22 Feb 2010 18:42

The link is in the colourist credit at the bottom of the post. DA, do you not like nipples in general, or do you not like the colourist's style? Please bear in mind that the thread is primarily for artistic feedback.
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Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major

Postby DAMartin » 23 Feb 2010 14:40

I dislike nipples in general, and mentioned these in particular due to being added by the color, but the rest of the colouring is very good overall. I just highlighted the nipples due to being in the latest panels, thus being my last impression of the story (first and last impressions are very important). That also means that I'll just see them as a minor thing once the complete coloured version is finished.
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Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major

Postby Sundance » 23 Feb 2010 21:13

what's wrong with nipples?

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