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The Baron
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Post subject: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major Posted: 21 Feb 2010 10:59 |
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_________________ Alas, being temporarily robbed of my superpowers, I shall have to rely upon mere human ingenuity.
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Sundance
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Post subject: Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major Posted: 21 Feb 2010 12:31 |
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Joined: 20 Jan 2009 11:14 Posts: 5038
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nice work. just a shame there's a bit cut off the bottom in the one panel.
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DAMartin
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Post subject: Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major Posted: 21 Feb 2010 17:27 |
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Joined: 27 Apr 2009 17:37 Posts: 3503 Location: A farm in Ercilla, Chile
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Wow! If not for knowing him from other stories, I wouldn't have guessed  was the villain! I mean, it seems like those stories about the worth of training hard and doing the best you can. Nice colouring, save for the hideous red spots on  's chest in the latest panels.
_________________  "You were engineered with such potential, Serpentor. But you lack the most important DNA of all... mine."
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The Kraken Wakes
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Post subject: Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major Posted: 21 Feb 2010 17:38 |
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DAMartin wrote: Wow! If not for knowing him from other stories, I wouldn't have guessed  was the villain! I mean, it seems like those stories about the worth of training hard and doing the best you can. Nice colouring, save for the hideous red spots on  's chest in the latest panels. you dont like his nipples? really nice colouring and loving this a lot as its one of my favourite BAF stories...
_________________ She lives in hope, but she used to live in Barnsley She took bereavement calmly and decided to relocate 
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Post subject: Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major Posted: 21 Feb 2010 17:42 |
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lol, more nipple action.
i really like the colouring on this
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DAMartin
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Post subject: Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major Posted: 21 Feb 2010 18:00 |
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The Kraken Wakes wrote: you dont like his nipples? Well, no, I find nipples hideous, like a big mole on the chest.
_________________  "You were engineered with such potential, Serpentor. But you lack the most important DNA of all... mine."
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Red Laser
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Post subject: Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major Posted: 22 Feb 2010 14:36 |
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Ok anyway meanwhile back on the ranch...... Fuzz does great work I like what he has done with this story so far and can't wait to see more. He has a deviantart page so I am sure he would like feedback on it. I can't post a link to it because the pcs here in work have a lot of sites blocked.
_________________ Spock, where the hell's the power you promised?
One damn minute, Admiral
"Red! The colour of my Shadows, The colour of fire and of blood......All that I stand for!" Baron Ironblood, Operation Bloodhound
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The Baron
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Post subject: Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major Posted: 22 Feb 2010 18:42 |
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The link is in the colourist credit at the bottom of the post. DA, do you not like nipples in general, or do you not like the colourist's style? Please bear in mind that the thread is primarily for artistic feedback.
_________________ Alas, being temporarily robbed of my superpowers, I shall have to rely upon mere human ingenuity.
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DAMartin
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Post subject: Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major Posted: 23 Feb 2010 14:40 |
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Joined: 27 Apr 2009 17:37 Posts: 3503 Location: A farm in Ercilla, Chile
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I dislike nipples in general, and mentioned these in particular due to being added by the color, but the rest of the colouring is very good overall. I just highlighted the nipples due to being in the latest panels, thus being my last impression of the story (first and last impressions are very important). That also means that I'll just see them as a minor thing once the complete coloured version is finished.
_________________  "You were engineered with such potential, Serpentor. But you lack the most important DNA of all... mine."
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Sundance
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Post subject: Re: BFTB Colouring Project - The Black Major Posted: 23 Feb 2010 21:13 |
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Joined: 20 Jan 2009 11:14 Posts: 5038
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what's wrong with nipples?
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